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Topic: RWBY
OK I know I will be in big trouble for this considering how monsterly popular this show was but I feel like rwbys world building/character writing was all over the place the fairytale themes where stretched out and I felt like they were surface level only in some cases and it felt like they either failed to research the character inspirations or just couldn't be bothered and some characters inspirations were two different characters mashed in ways that didn't make sense if you knew the story
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Jenny Brown And it also feels like they couldn't stick to a theme for inspirations fairytales mythology religion poetry characters children's literature fables nursery rhymes and characters from books that kids might have seen on the big screen like the jungle book and animals both living and dead that makes sense but food themed? Meme themes? Internet website themed? The book the glass menagerie? Jurassic park?Bartleby the scrivener?real world actors that have nothing to do with the show?the island of doctor moreau?a clockwork orange?the boardgame clue?sherlock holmes ? Characters from a very well known anime?supervillains from a butch hartman cartoon?minecraft?famous French fashion designers?Italian inventor/artists?
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Jenny Brown I just feel like the writing could have been better if they weren't afraid to go whole hog with the fairytale inspiration they can still be action girls/boy in awesome outfits just have it be more than just a name and one or two references
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Jenny Brown So to put my nonexistent money where my mouth is I will put down all the characters that are inspired by something from rwby and Wright a quickish blurb about what would they be like if they were more than just a surface level inspiration so I can move on from my disappointment? Hate? Of this show and you guys can react if you want or add things if you like if you are just as disappointed with this show as I was
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Jenny Brown Character 1 ruby rose inspired by little red riding hood have her be a little smarter someone who fights with her brains & has a sneaky survivalist sort of mindset yes she still cares about her friends but she knows she won't be able to help if she gets killed she's not a super genius she might walk into a trap & have to be blatantly told she's being a idiot & what she did wrong & have her have a grandmother who is a experienced huntswoman who likes good food cats & flowers & is a teacher at the academy teaches about herbal remedies & home defense and home ec the huntsman type figure could be a guard for the school campus & the mother could be a over protective worrier who also micromanages ruby who has a house in the country who has made ruby at times have moments of doubt about what she wants does she want to just focus on her huntswoman training or does she want to try and use this opportunity to maybe get to know someone romantically at this new place far from home & have the wolf be a false love interest who appears like a kind submissive charming polite gentle obliging sweet complacent unassuming guy who never gets angry doesn't hate anyone or anything & is a quiet guy but it turns out he is a wolf faunus who is a assassin & master of disguise who is accompanied by his adopted mother who is a ogress who is after revenge on grandma but he isn't allowed on campus so he trys to get a way in through ruby grandma gets knocked unconscious by the oggress before ruby arrives and ruby outwits the oggress & wolf & the guard arrives & escorts them off campus later ruby & her grandmother are visited by the wolf faunus brother who is not as stealthy or smart as his bro & trys to ambush ruby & her grandmother but they both team up together and get rid of him grandmas semblance is the ability to store anything she wants in a hammerspace type area & ruby hers is a shield of fire that activates when she's in life threatening danger ruby likes red but also gold
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Jenny Brown Also have the huntsman have a wife who owns a laundromat and a son ruby's age who ruby eventually gets together with and ruby is a polite considerate respectful girl with good manners and have the reason for the wolf brothers wanting revenge be that grandma brought there parents who were criminals who killed other faunus to jail optional new name Blanchett rose and optional new hair color blonde optional new costume have her rotate between a hooded riding cloaks and caps and no wolf motifs in her outfits
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Jenny Brown Character 2 yang Xiao long inspiration goldilocks first step is I am not going to have ruby and yang be sisters anymore instead they will be childhood friends who are like sisters but have ruby's mother not approve of yang and think shes a bad influence second I am going to make yang a fox faunus have her past be originally she was a naive spoiled brat who was the granddaughter of the female head of a homeowners association at that time her grandmother got in some new residents to live in there biggest most impressive and luxurious house a family of bear faunus diplomats who worked on faunus human relationships excepting to be invited in to their house yangs grandmother was shocked and furious that she wasn't which was no surprise to everyone else in the neighborhood as she was a rude arrogant mean frequently dirty woman who had the habit of swearing and had a semblance that had the ability to break anything she came into contact with so when the bears had to leave there house the next day she was watching and waiting she brought her granddaughter to get into the house yang i am going to give a semblance that operates as a skeleton key after they get in yangs grandmother eats the food the bears had out for breakfast and breaks a chair and a bed and she and yang hide in the Armoire the bears discover them and yangs grandmother leaps out the window abandoning her granddaughter after that yangs grandmother mother is arrested and yang is sent to live in the custody of ruby's grandmother under her care she grows into a respectful not spoiled girl who is still deeply embarrassed by how she acted as a child and wants to become a huntress to make sure that people like her biological grandmother don't cause trouble she still has the occasional problem with invading people's privacy and personal space but she's trying to improve and is also overly curious
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